I really enjoyed your post about Pax what would you take. I like how you put a picture of everything. When I read your post I learnt that you didn’t take any weapon like a fork or pocket knife. Maybe next time you could spread it out a bit more because it was a bit hard to read. Would you take anything else?
Thank you so much for your comment. You had a pretty good point on not taking any weapons, so if I was to take anything else I would take a pocket knife.
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Hi Rosie,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your post about Pax what would you take. I like how you put a picture of everything. When I read your post I learnt that you didn’t take any weapon like a fork or pocket knife. Maybe next time you could spread it out a bit more because it was a bit hard to read. Would you take anything else?
Hi Jenna,
DeleteThank you so much for your comment. You had a pretty good point on not taking any weapons, so if I was to take anything else I would take a pocket knife.
Kind Regards
Rosie