I hope you love my Slide Show all about me! Please leave a comment on something I could work on.
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Wednesday 9 May 2018
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Rosie this is very creative i like how you had such cool backrounds!!
ReplyDeleteGreat job posting a comment Jess. Please remember the motto: Positive, thoughtful & helpful.
ReplyDeleteRosie, this slideshow is full of colour and information. I like how you have used pictures from outside of school to add fun into your presentation.
Slide 3: Generally, it is a good idea to keep the font style the same on a slide, otherwise it starts to look overwhelming and slightly disjointed.
Well done.
Hi Rosie! I love your presentation, it was very creative and had awesome backgrounds. You did a great job with all the links and adding your own photo's to the slides. Next time check for grammar mistakes for example in the family slide you said "me and my sister" instead of "my sister and I."
ReplyDeleteDouble thumbs up!
Thank you for your comment Jessica, I will fix the mistake. Thank you for telling me!
DeleteJessica, double thumbs up to you as well. A very thoughtful and helpful comment, keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteyou have realy cool backgrounds
ReplyDeletei like the music you have chosen
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Talofa Lava , my name is Max from Belfast School , I loved this because of all the great things you have said about your Mother for Mother's Day, I love how much effort you put into your poem. For next time you could do a haiku for your next piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment Max. I really enjoyed your positive, thoughtful and helpful comment. I will definitely try the haiku poem.
DeleteKia ora, I'm Tui from Belfast Bchool. I really enjoyed the slideshow about you because I could connect a lot of stuff to me, and I love the song choice of X. I also really loved the backgrounds of the slides, they were really colourful, pretty and I want to know where you've got them from?!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Rosie i’m charlie from Belfast School. I really enjoyed your slideshow with the poem for mothers day it was really kind.
ReplyDeleteI’m glad I had the chance to read your blog. keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I’m Shontelle from Belfast School. I really liked reading your post “This is me”. I thought it was great to see how much we have in common! I also really like the type of music you’re into, it reminds me myself quite a lot actually. How often do you surf? Do you normally go surfing with your friends? If so I think that would be very interesting to post about as well.
Hi Tui,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for commenting on my blog. I got all my backgrounds from google images. I just searched up tie dye or pastel backgrounds and then lots of choices came up.
Hi Charlie,
ReplyDeleteThanks for leaving a comment and reading my mothers day poem! I will try hard to keep up the good work.
Hi Shontelle,
ReplyDeleteThanks for leaving a comment. That's so cool how we have so much in common! I surf every Saturday, but only from November to February when it's warm. Yes I do go surfing with my friends, and my sister, we are part of a club, and lots of kids from school go as well. Do you play any sports?
cool slide
ReplyDeleteWOW i love how you added all the information and links!!! And I love Surfing too!!
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